It was hard to hear the voices.
Otherwise, just work on your animation.
Pretty decent first flash.
Yes! You Fixed It!
That dialogue is so well done! :D
Haven't noticed the little things the first time - like Keira's weird laugh halfway through when talking about Neverland.
The animation is subpar & could be worked on a little more.
I'm glad you fixed the out of sync dialogue problem from the first time. But there is still a slight problem with the last line - it doesn't play. :(
And Bill Cosby. :p
I am still working on the animation, there is still one more scene to go in here but i don't know if i will uploaded on here because of the problems that happen with audio sync -i'll see .
i am stil trying to fix those problems - but it is more a matter of softwear problem - when i try and save as swf problems occur - if you want you can check my video on youtube - it is uploaded in hd there - just type gagamanmusic on youtube and go on my channel - it is the video that autoplays there,
thanks for the comment
It's always the simple ones that I like.
And yours couldn't get any simpler - despite the ending, you only used one color: blue.
I'd suggest making the animation fluid unless that's the style you're going for. Otherwise I'd suggest sprucing up the drawings a bit more.
I'm not even sure what happened at the end - was that the character at the bottom right corner of the last screen? :p
The point is to be as vague as possible.
Definitely the Voice Acting
This could've been good had you gotten decent voice work, or a better way of recording - I don't know.
I could barely hear what Link was saying. And Lucario talked tooooooo sssssllllllloooooowwwwwwww. Timing is everything in comedy.
I don't have a problem with the drawings at all, but a little more animation couldn't hurt.
I hope you fix it & resubmit.
Not Bad for a Stickman
Short & sweet. You definitely have a sense of style
But seriously get away from the stick drawings. It'd be awesome to see hand drawn figures.
Yeh thanks man. I only have the means to draw with a mouse because my scanner broke. Im going to buy a Wacom drawing tablet very soon so my drawing will hopefully be a tad better =P cheers
Not As Bad As I Expected
I always have the lowest expectations when I see "stick" something in the title - but this one came out alright. Good music, not so good graphic-wise.
-theory of a plot for world domination
Short but Funny
Not bad, in fact - better than my first flash I think. I like the whole drawing-of-Sonic.
What a coincidence - MY first flash had Dr. Robotnik also! And my second one had a video game character not breathing in space! :o
Great minds think alike! ;)
Guess He Had a Hard Head
I don't know if it was the lagging that made this look more serious than it probably was supposed to be, but I think it worked out in the end: it was kind of funny/sad at the same time.
But yeah, PreLoader...
Linkin Park, Really?
Despite that I find stick animations boring, you did quite a good on the animation.
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